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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the feedback asked by the school about the wonderful cookery course recently attended by me.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the feedback asked by the school about the wonderful cookery course recently attended by me. JLJWD
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the feedback asked by the school about the wonderful cookery course recently attended by me. I am grateful to share my thoughts on this, since I really enjoyed the course throughout and was able to learn cooking only because of it. The course was well managed and actually covered cuisines all around the world. The faculties were approachable, which was significant for a beginner like me. I never thought I would be able to cook dishes like pasta, pizza, continental, Chinese and many more, it was all possible because of the chefs who are actually industry experts and knows how to handle the students. I enjoyed my course to the fullest, mainly because of the people and the teaching methods. Since this course gained a huge success, I would suggest the school to offer another course which includes students making new dishes of their own out of the same ingredients. Thank you for seeking my feedback and, I look forward to joining another course in the near future. Yours Sincerely, Ricky Ponting
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the feedback asked by the school about the wonderful cookery
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course
recently attended by me. I am grateful to share my thoughts on this, since I
really
enjoyed the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
throughout and was able to learn cooking
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only
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because
of it.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
was well managed and actually covered cuisines all around the world. The faculties were approachable, which was significant for a beginner like me. I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
I would be able to cook dishes like pasta, pizza, continental, Chinese and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more, it was all possible
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the chefs who are actually industry experts and knows how to handle the students. I enjoyed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to the fullest,
mainly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and the teaching methods. Since this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
gained a huge success, I would suggest the school to offer another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
which includes students making new dishes of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
out of the same ingredients.

Thank you for seeking my feedback and, I look forward to joining another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in the near future.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Ricky
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the feedback asked by the school about the wonderful cookery course recently attended by me.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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