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Informal Letter to your friend who had invited you to his house

Informal Letter to your friend who had invited you to his house 06KNl
Dear Ashok, It's been quite long since I've heard from you. I cannot express my happiness on receiving your invitation to put me up at your place during the upcoming fall season. I'd love to come over and spend time with you but the work schedule is a little hectic during that time of the year. I have been employed at Aba company since the beginning of the previous month and we have quite a lot of trainings scheduled for the next six months as a part of the onboarding process. Since these trainings are mandatory I don't think I will be able to skip them. I had ran into your ex girlfriend Susan last week. Susan and I were making plans to come over to Tokyo for a surprise visit during Winters. I would be free during then and hope you too would be availablethen. Can't wait to hear from you. Your buddy, John
Dear Ashok,

It's been quite long since I've heard from you. I cannot express my happiness on receiving your invitation to put me up at your place during the upcoming fall season. I'd
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over and spend time with you
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but
the work schedule is a
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little
hectic during that time of the year.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
been employed
at
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Aba
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company
since the beginning of the previous
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
month and
we have quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
trainings scheduled for the
next
six months as a part of the onboarding process.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
these trainings are mandatory I don't
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think
I will be able to skip them. I had
Use past participle here: "run".
ran
into your
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
ex girlfriend
Susan last week.

Susan and I were making plans to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
over to Tokyo for a surprise visit during Winters. I would be free during then and hope you too would be
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availablethen
.

Can't wait to hear from you.

Your buddy,

John
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IELTS letter Informal Letter to your friend who had invited you to his house

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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