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Informal Letter to your friend who had invited you to his house

Informal Letter to your friend who had invited you to his house 06KNl

Dear Ashok, It's been quite long since I've heard from you. I cannot express my happiness on receiving your invitation to put me up at your place during the upcoming fall season. I'd love to come over and spend time with you but the work schedule is a little hectic during that time of the year. I have been employed at Aba company since the beginning of the previous month and we have quite a lot of trainings scheduled for the next six months as a part of the onboarding process. Since these trainings are mandatory I don't think I will be able to skip them. I had ran into your ex girlfriend Susan last week. Susan and I were making plans to come over to Tokyo for a surprise visit during Winters. I would be free during then and hope you too would be availablethen. Can't wait to hear from you. Your buddy, John

Dear Ashok,

It's been quite long since I've heard from you. I cannot express my happiness on receiving your invitation to put me up at your place during the upcoming fall season. I'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over and spend time with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the work schedule is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 hectic during that time of the year.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been employed
 at Possible spelling mistake found.ABAAkaAPAAnaCBAPBA
Aba
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 since the beginning of the previous Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).month, and
month and
 we have quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 trainings scheduled for the next
 six months as a part of the onboarding process. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 these trainings are mandatory I don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will be able to skip them. I had Use past participle here: "run".run
ran
 into your This word is normally spelled with hyphen.ex-girlfriend
ex girlfriend
 Susan last week.

Susan and I were making plans to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over to Tokyo for a surprise visit during Winters. I would be free during then and hope you too would be Possible spelling mistake found.available then
availablethen
.

Can't wait to hear from you.

Your buddy,

John