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letter to introduce myself

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Dear Sir, I’m writing this letter to make an acquaintance with you. It’s my pleasure when I received high recognition from Ms Carol and allowed me to have a chance to teach the IELTS7 class which you are in charge of. Firstly, to be conducive to our work, I would like to introduce myself to you. My English name’s Tracy, and I’m 28 years old. I have been working as an English teacher in IAS Center for roughly 4 years. Besides that, I also have an affinity for analyzing and researching the IELTS Exam. Thus, I hope that with my experience, I can contribute to the learners’ improvement in learning English. Secondly, I understand that this is also my privilege to work with the professors, experts who can help me to complete myself in knowledge and even soul. For that reason, I am deeply appreciative to acquire the instructions as well as advice from you and everyone. In addition, during the lessons, mistakes are inevitable, so I am willing to listen and note down any feedback and response in order to enhance the quality of the lesson. Last but not least, I would like to send you my sincere and deep thanks because of your credibility for not only individuals but also IAS Center in general. Yours Sincerely, Tracy
Dear Sir,

I’m writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an acquaintance with you.

It’s my pleasure when I received high recognition from Ms Carol and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
me to have a chance to teach the IELTS7
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
which you are in charge of.

Firstly
, to be conducive to our work, I would like to introduce myself to you. My English name’s Tracy, and I’m 28 years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
. I have been working as an English teacher in IAS Center for roughly 4 years.
Besides
that, I
also
have an affinity for analyzing and researching the IELTS Exam.
Thus
, I hope that with my experience, I can contribute to the learners’ improvement in learning English.

Secondly
, I understand that this is
also
my privilege to work with the professors, experts who can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to complete myself in knowledge and even soul. For that reason, I am
deeply
appreciative to acquire the instructions
as well
as advice from you and everyone.
In addition
, during the lessons, mistakes are inevitable,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I am willing to listen and note down any feedback and response in order to enhance the quality of the lesson.

Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you my sincere and deep thanks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of your credibility for not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
individuals
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
IAS Center
in general
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Tracy
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IELTS letter letter to introduce myself

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
218 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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