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Hello everyone, today we will introduce the cherry blossom viewing festival or Hanami festival in Japan. In Japanese, "Hana" means flower, and "mi" means to see, so the Hanami festival simply means a flower viewing festival. Hanami festival takes place all over Japan so we will only talk about the festival in Kyoto. The cherry blossom viewing festival often happens from 16/3 to 26/3 every year( you can see here in the cherry blossom forecast 16/3 is the day of cherry blossom first bloom and 26/3 is its full bloom). The National Cherry Blossom Festival originally commemorates the 1912 gift of 3, 000 cherry trees from Mayor Yukio Ozaki of Tokyo to the city of Washington, DC, and celebrates the enduring friendship between the people of the United States and Japan. In Japan, the flowering cherry tree, or "Sakura, " is an important flowering plant. The beauty of the cherry blossom is a symbol with rich meaning in Japanese culture. For more than a hundred years, they have celebrated cherry trees blooming in solidarity.
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