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Letter to friend whether he should go to college or get a job.

Letter to friend whether he should go to college or get a job. AJNDL

Dear Nikunj, Hope you are doing well. I received your letter couple of days back. I understand your situation as I was also confused in the past. Actually, both ideas have their own advantages and disadvantages. Firstly, I think that you should get a job as I already know that your financial situation is not good. Also, the colleges nowadays have very pricy. You should try to get the job in your field. The job will give you the required experience and sense of satisfaction to fulfill your family needs. This experience will help you to get the better job. Moreover, you meet new people and face new challenges in the job that will help you to become a better person. If you still want to learn, you can learn online in your free time. Nowadays, there are a lot of free platforms that will help you in your education. If you need any help, feel free to contact me any time. See you soon. Take care. Yours Faithfully, Mayur

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