1. 5.5 My key mistake was not answering all parts of the question. Particularly, stating the purpose. 2. 6 Ideas are not conveyed clearly. Letter tone was not consistent. 3. 6 Vocabulary is not sufficient and specific. 4. 6 Mistakes with punctuation and sentence structure. 5. I have thoroughly gone through the band 9 model letters and practised with those questions for task response, coherence and cohesion. Did grammar course.

Dear Glenn, Hope you're doing well. I'm just writing to tell you that I've won a sum of 3000 US dollars in a lucky draw happened last week. As you know, we celebrated the 71st Saudi national day on September 23. Lulu group of companies had conducted a lucky draw on the same day and I got an entry coupon by shopping for 100 dollars during their draw period, but I didn't look at the prize list until they called me and told that you were one of the lucky winners. I'm planning to give some money to my sister for her house construction because they're struggling with pandemic effects. Also, I've got an idea to gift some mobiles to poor children in our area as they could find that useful with their online classes. I'm having a party in the next weekend and would love you to come. Let's celebrate my good luck with our friends, also we can have a get together. Because of covid restrictions, I'm planning an in-door party at the Grant resort, Dammam. Hoping to see you soon. Keep in touch. Jibin.