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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. dMQp
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that there is an online course of asp. net core. I want to apply for this course as it is one of the latest technologies in web development. This course will feature the basics of the programming language as well as some advanced concepts in order to built faster, secure and mobile compatible websites. It will not only help me in boosting my skills but will also provide an opportunity for me to implement trending technology in our systems. As the course is providing an in-depth knowledge about the development of website with much ease it will improve the performance significantly. It would be helpfully if I can get some time from my work to get enrolled in the course. It would be for an hour and unfortunetly it is during my working hours so, I request you to grant me an hour leave. Waiting for your reply. Your sincerely, ABC
Dear Sir/Madam,

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net
core. I want to apply for this
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course
as it is one of the latest technologies in web development.

This
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course
will feature the basics of the programming language
as well
as
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some
advanced concepts in order to built faster, secure and mobile compatible websites.

It will not
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only
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help
me in boosting my
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skills
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but
will
also
provide an opportunity for me to implement trending technology in our systems.
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As
the
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course
is providing an in-depth knowledge about the development of website with much
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ease
it will
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improve
the performance
significantly
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get
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time from my work to
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enrolled in the course.

It would be for an hour and
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unfortunetly
it is during my working hours
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, I request you to grant me an hour
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leave
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Waiting for your reply.

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Your
sincerely
,

ABC
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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9 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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