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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying that subject.Write a letter to your friend -give details of the course you took at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give details of the course you took at the university 2. explain why you recommend the University. 3. give some advice about how to apply.

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying that subject. Write a letter to your friend -give details of the course you took at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give details of the course you took at the university 2. explain why you recommend the University. 3. give some advice about how to apply. px9L
Dear Phil, Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I received your email yesterday and glad to know that you are planning to enroll for Management degree from Waterloo University. I too had done the same course from the University two years back. This course is highly advantageous in recent times as it provides you with complete exposure to the competitive market. At my time, this course was of 2years duration but now, they have curtailed the curriculum and added some value-added subjects and lessen the duration to 1 year. Primarily, This University tries to reduce down the theoretical part so that they can incorporate more practical sessions for the students. Those practical sessions will be conducted by people belonging to Managerial positions from top-notch companies. This way you can seek some practical tips from them to implement in your future. In addition to this, consummate faculty members are always ready to guide you in every possible manner to land successfully in the professional world. In order to apply, you can download brochure from their website and apply for the course by sending them a demand draft of fifteen hundred dollars along with the application form. Please ensure to do it at the earliest as they have limited quota. Feel free to contact me in case any help is needed. With love, Ana
Dear Phil,

Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health. I received your email yesterday and glad to know that you are planning to enroll for Management degree from Waterloo University.

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had done the same
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from the University two years back. This
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course
was of 2years duration
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but
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now
, they have curtailed the curriculum and
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added
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some
value-
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added
subjects and lessen the duration to 1 year.

Primarily
, This University tries to
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reduce
down the theoretical part
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so
that they can incorporate more practical sessions for the students. Those practical sessions will
be conducted
by
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people
belonging to Managerial positions from top-notch
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companies
. This way you can seek
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
practical tips from them to implement in your future.
In addition
to this, consummate faculty members are always ready to guide you in every possible manner to land
successfully
in the professional world.

In order to apply, you can download brochure from their website and apply for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
by sending them a demand draft of fifteen hundred dollars along with the application form.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
ensure to do it at the earliest as they have limited quota. Feel free to contact me in case any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
is needed
.

With
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love
,

Ana
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying that subject. Write a letter to your friend -give details of the course you took at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give details of the course you took at the university 2. explain why you recommend the University. 3. give some advice about how to apply.

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225 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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