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Letter to David about landmarks in my city.

Letter to David about landmarks in my city. YkQ0m

Dear David, Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry, I haven't written to you because I was busy. I'm really happy to hear that your friends are visiting my city. I'll tell you everything about it. The city I live in is located on river Yenisei which divides land to two shores. We have got some popular landmarks to see. One of them is the reserve "Stolby" or it can be translated to "Columns". If your friends are active, they would like to have a walk there. Next one is the Chapel located on the highest point of the city. There your friends could see the whole Krasnoyarsk. They can visit our History museum. It has plenty of interesting exhibits such as the evolution of the hilman and the dinosaur skeleton. One last thing that they can do, is that they could visit the island called "Tatyshev". There your friends could rent a bike or rollers. In the winter they also can rent skates. I think that is all what I can suggest. Can't wait to meet your friends. All the best, Name

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