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Letter to complain about the construction plan of the multistory apartment in place of the public park.

Letter to complain about the construction plan of the multistory apartment in place of the public park. PVkRp
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to share my opinion about the plan of building apartments in a public park in the downtown area of Canada I have recently heard the news on the radio about the construction of new apartments in the park located in downtown area. I am completely shocked to know about such plans. This park is a blessing in disguise for all the local people living in this area. People use this garden for their exercise and workouts to stay salubrious and agile. In addition to this, the little ones usually play games and enjoy the swings ride available in this park. The plan of transforming this lush green garden into a multistory society is not acceptable to me. This will result in deteriorating the environment and also becoming the reason of causing harmful diseases among the people living here. Although it is a good plan of accommodating this increasing population, destroying parks is not a fruitful idea. I hope you will understand my concern and publish an article about the drawbacks of this plan to open the closed eyes of the government. Yours faithfully, Mark Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to share my opinion about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
of building apartments in a public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
in the downtown area of Canada

I have recently heard the news on the radio about the construction of new apartments in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
located in downtown area.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am completely shocked to know about such plans.

This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
is a blessing in disguise for all the local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living in this area.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this garden for their exercise and workouts to stay salubrious and agile.
In addition
to this, the
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little
ones
usually
play games and enjoy the swings ride available in this park.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
of transforming this lush green garden into a multistory society is not acceptable to me. This will result in deteriorating the environment and
also
becoming the reason of causing harmful diseases among the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living here. Although it is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
of accommodating this increasing population, destroying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parks
is not a fruitful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
.

I hope you will understand my concern and publish an article about the drawbacks of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
to open the closed eyes of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mark Smith
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IELTS letter Letter to complain about the construction plan of the multistory apartment in place of the public park.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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