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Letter to Company for Volunteer work

Letter to Company for Volunteer work Awwax
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing in regard to the recent news I heard about Africa's Child Education System is undergoing a change and, they need volunteers. I have heard great reviews about Cultural Expeditions and would like to apply for the same. As I mentioned, I would like to volunteer for Africa for young children's future for two months. Since, my summer holidays have just started, I feel I can utilize this time for the betterment of their lives. The main reason to do Voluntary work is I have been a lot in my childhood and know what poverty means and where it can lead. Going there and teach their parents about this is great chance where the government is helping them and they should definitely make the most of it. Having experience of more than 6 years working at an NGO I can say that I am very kid's friendly and very brilliant in influencing people. I hope to hearing from you soon. Your's faithfully, Sagar
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing in regard to the recent news I heard about Africa's Child Education System is undergoing a
change
and, they need volunteers. I have heard great reviews about Cultural Expeditions and would like to apply for the same.

As I mentioned, I would like to volunteer for Africa for young children's future for two months. Since, my summer holidays have
just
started
, I feel I can utilize this time for the betterment of their
lives
.

The main reason to do Voluntary work is I have been a lot in my childhood and know what poverty means and where it can lead. Going there and teach their parents about this is great chance where the
government
is helping
them and
they should definitely
make
the most of it.

Having experience of more than 6 years working at an NGO I can say that I am
very
kid's friendly and
very
brilliant in influencing
people
.

I hope to hearing from you
soon
.

Your's
faithfully
,

Sagar
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IELTS letter Letter to Company for Volunteer work

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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