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Letter to cafe manager of a cafeteria you use

Letter to cafe manager of a cafeteria you use kjQw2

I am student of that college where you have your cafe. I hope when you receive my letter you are in a radiant health and in good spirits. I am writing you for the reason because today i saw on notice board in the college that we have to give you feedbacks so thats how you improve your quality. However everybody has a complaint about food is is that the food is so much spicy thats why so many students dont eat the food. Also nowadays half of the students of the college avoid your canteen because of the spicy food and i an also one of them. Also even worst was that the seats of the canteen were so stained

I am student of that college where you have your 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
. I hope when you receive my letter you are in a radiant health and in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 spirits. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing you for the reason This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 on notice board in the college that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 give you feedbacks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible spelling mistake foundthat's
thats
 how you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your quality. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 everybody has a complaint about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
Possible typo: you repeated a wordis
is is
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much spicy Possible spelling mistake foundthat's
thats
 why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 students Possible spelling mistake founddon't
dont
 eat the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 nowadays half of the students of the college avoid your canteen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the spicy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 and i Did you mean "and" or "any"?andany
an
also
 one of them. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 even worst was that the seats of the canteen were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstained.stained!stained?stained:stained,stained;
stained