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Letter to cafe manager of a cafeteria you use

Letter to cafe manager of a cafeteria you use kjQw2
I am student of that college where you have your cafe. I hope when you receive my letter you are in a radiant health and in good spirits. I am writing you for the reason because today i saw on notice board in the college that we have to give you feedbacks so thats how you improve your quality. However everybody has a complaint about food is is that the food is so much spicy thats why so many students dont eat the food. Also nowadays half of the students of the college avoid your canteen because of the spicy food and i an also one of them. Also even worst was that the seats of the canteen were so stained
I am student of that college where you have your
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. I hope when you receive my letter you are in a radiant health and in
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good
spirits.
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I
am writing you for the reason
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because
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today
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i
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saw
on notice board in the college that we
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have to
give you feedbacks
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so
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thats
how you
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improve
your quality.
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However
everybody has a complaint about
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food
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is is
that the
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food
is
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so
much spicy
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thats
why
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so
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many
students
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dont
eat the
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food
.
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Also
nowadays half of the students of the college avoid your canteen
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because
of the spicy
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food
and i
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an
also
one of them.
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Also
even worst was that the seats of the canteen were
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so
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stained

IELTS letter Letter to cafe manager of a cafeteria you use

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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