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‘Write a letter to a manager of a theatre about an overcoat you have left behind. In your letter – • Describe your overcoat • Describe your seat • Explain what you want to be done

‘Write a letter to a manager of a theatre about an overcoat you have left behind. In your letter – • Describe your overcoat • Describe your seat • Explain what you want to be done 1Awy7
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to the overcoat I left at your theatre on 3rd November, 2021. I was in a show which started at 11: 00 am in the morning. I had my seat on the last row of the theatre. My seat number was H21. My coat is black in color, it has 2 pockets at the front. It might be on the handle of the seat where there is drink holder. In my pocket I have my important documents which is really needed. It has my ID’s, my license and my few loyalty cards. The most important is the license and even one of the card which is my entry card to my office. I would appreciate if you can have a look in the theatre or can take a moment to ask the housekeeping staff if they found it. It would be great if you can send it to me on my address or you can call me on my number for updating the status of my coat. My address is 1502 howland avenue, London Ontario N5V1W7. Yous sincerely Tanvi Kahar
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to the overcoat I
left
at your
theatre
on 3rd
November, 2021
. I was in a
show
which
started
at 11: 00
am in the morning
.
I
had my seat on the last row of the
theatre
. My seat number was H21. My coat is
black in color
, it has 2 pockets at the front. It might be on the handle of the seat where there is drink holder.

In my pocket I have my
important
documents which is
really
needed. It has my ID’s, my license and my few loyalty cards. The most
important
is the license and even one of the card which is my entry card to my office.

I would appreciate if you can have a look in the
theatre
or can take a moment to ask the housekeeping staff if they found it. It would be great if you can
send
it to me on my address or you can call me on my number for updating the status of my coat. My address is 1502
howland
avenue, London Ontario N5V1W7.

Yous
sincerely


Tanvi
Kahar
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IELTS letter ‘Write a letter to a manager of a theatre about an overcoat you have left behind. In your letter – • Describe your overcoat • Describe your seat • Explain what you want to be done

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  American English
5 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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