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Lunar new year biggest festival in Vietnam

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Hello everyone, to day I will tell you about my favourite festival in my country. In Vietnam, we have alot of festival but biggest festival is Lunar new year, which festival you can get more time with your family because in that day people can relax for not going to work and just enjoy that moment. In this festival, the children gets lucky money from adult, moreover, everyone will play cards, lotto and many fun game. Lunar new year is the festival for the new year can get more lucky than last year so their cloths all new and fashion. The most I like in festival is you can erning money by lucky money from adult or playing card and lotto, furthermore, this festival is the celebration to connected people get closer so try to talk with everyone, telling them your story about one’s year ago and listening story of other people. Thanks for your reading.

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