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Descibe your appearance and your personality

Descibe your appearance and your personality Wqbga

Hello everyone, my name is Ngoc Y and I am 18 years old. I am tall and thin because I rarely eat sweets and recently I've been losing weight. I have an oval face, rosy lips, thick eyebrows that aren’t that dark. I have straight brown hair, bright black eyes, and I have inherited a straight nose from my mother and I like it. My appearance is inherited from my mother. My favorite color is black, that’s why I love wearing black clothes. Every time I go out, I wear a black t-shirt and long pants. At first, I was shy to meet someone, but when I got to know someone better and felt comfortable with them, I could talk to them and I talked a lot. I help others when they need it and be here for everyone that needs me. I am kind, sociable, happy, and respectful. I like to treat others with respect and treat them how I want to be treated. I respect everyone. If you need something important I will make sure I try my best to get it for you. Thank you everyone for listening.

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everyone
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 I am 18 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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. I am tall and thin This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I rarely eat sweets and recently I've been losing weight. I have an oval face, rosy lips, thick eyebrows that aren’t that dark. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have straight brown hair, bright black eyes, and I have inherited a straight nose from my mother and I like it. My appearance is inherited
 from my mother. My favorite color is black, that’s why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 wearing black clothes. Every time I go out, I wear a black t-shirt and long pants. At first
, I was shy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 someone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to know someone better and felt comfortable with them, I could talk to them and I talked a lot. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 others when they need it and be here for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withanybodypeopleeverybody
everyone
 that needs me. I am kind, sociable, happy, and respectful. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 like to treat others with respect and treat them how I want to be treated
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 respect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withanybodypeopleeverybody
everyone
. If you need something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure I try my best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it for you. Thank you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withanybodypeopleeverybody
everyone
 for listening. 