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Your next door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often loioise sleep. Write a letter to your neigjbour . In your letter decribe the situation. Explian the problem it is causing. Offer at least oine solution

I am your neighbour. I do not want to write a letter to you for this, but unfortunately i have to. I am writing this letter to enquire you the disturbance I feel now and then by your lous music. Although, I also love music but listening at such mid night is inappropriate. It disturbs me as well as my family members. As i have to get up early in the morning, because next day have to completer all house chors and prepare my child for school. This noise not only makes us sleepness but also effect my child's study who has been preparing for NEET exam. I do not want to stop you I just want to tell you that install sound proof windows in your home this will restrict the waves pass through the windoiws by absorbing thisYours sincerely, Manpreet kaur
I am your
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neighbour
. I do not want to write a letter to you for this,
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but
unfortunately
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i
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have to
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I
am writing this letter to
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enquire
you the disturbance I feel
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now
and then by your
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lous
music. Although, I
also
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love
music
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but
listening at such
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mid night
is inappropriate. It disturbs me
as well
as my family members. As
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i
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have to
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get
up early in the morning,
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because
next
day
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have to
completer all
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house
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chors
and prepare my child for school. This noise not
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only
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makes
us
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sleepness
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but
also
effect my child's study who has been preparing for
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NEET
exam. I do not want to
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stop
you I
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just
want to
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tell
you that install
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sound proof
windows in your home this will restrict the waves pass through the
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windoiws
by absorbing
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thisYours
sincerely
,
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Manpreet
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kaur

IELTS letter Your next door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often loioise sleep. Write a letter to your neigjbour. In your letter decribe the situation. Explian the problem it is causing. Offer at least oine solution

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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