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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Julie, Hope you are well! It was so great hearing you after such a long time. I am honored that you are asking me for advice on whether to camping or not, as you know I am an avid camper and I go camping frequently. I am positively sure that you would enjoy camping in Laqlouq’s forest, one of reasons why I believe that going camping is for you is, first of all, the views there are spectacular I think the main point of any outdoor activity is the views of nature in all its glory and in the second place is the fresh air, you can’t get that in the city. Another advantage is the starry night you may experience if it’s not cloudy, just think of sleeping under a blanket of stars. Well I don’t think it can get better than that. While all these points clearly paints you a pretty picture, one of the main disadvantages drawbacks tat you may encounter, is the weather it is so unpredictable you can’t know if you will have clear sky or a cloudy day, it’s all up to chance. Furthermore, be on the lookout for any wild animals, do not engage and leave food laying around, just be careful. Unfortunately, this time around I can’t go with you to Laqlouq as my husband and I have already booked a trip to visit his family in Italy. Maybe next time we’ll all go there again. I look forward to hear from you about your new adventure in the camping world. Warm wishes, Caroline
Dear Julie,

Hope you are well!

It was
so
great hearing you after such a long time. I
am honored
that you are asking me for advice on whether to camping or not, as you know I am an avid camper and I go camping
frequently
.

I am
positively
sure that you would enjoy camping in
Laqlouq
’s forest, one of reasons why I believe that going camping is for you is,
first of all
, the views there are spectacular I
think
the main point of any outdoor activity is the views of nature in all its glory and in the second place is the fresh air, you can’t
get
that in the city. Another advantage is the starry night you may experience if it’s not cloudy,
just
think
of sleeping under a blanket of stars. Well I don’t
think
it can
get
better than that.

While all these points
clearly
paints you a pretty picture, one of the main disadvantages drawbacks
tat
you may encounter, is the weather it is
so
unpredictable you can’t know if you will have
clear
sky or a cloudy day, it’s all up to chance.
Furthermore
, be on the lookout for any wild animals, do not engage and
leave
food
laying around
,
just
be careful.

Unfortunately, this time around I can’t
go with
you to
Laqlouq
as my husband and I have already booked a trip to visit his family in Italy. Maybe
next
time we’ll all go there again.

I look forward
to hear
from you about your new adventure in the camping world.

Warm wishes,

Caroline
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Letter
  American English
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262 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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