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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs. Smith, I am writing to apologize for the noise that borders you in the last few weeks and I hope you accept my sincere apologies for this inconvenient. As you know, this building is older than it looks so my husband and I decided to paint the kitchen and our living room but, we should pack some stuff and repair the cilling first. However, I am so sorry for what you have been through and I promise to keep the noise as low as I can. As a solution, we have decided that we will stop working from 12 pm to 4 pm, as we assume that your daughter sleeps every day at this time. Please accept my apology once again. Kind regards, Reyhaneh Sadaghiani, the next door neighbour
Dear Mrs. Smith,

I am writing to apologize for the noise that borders you in the last few weeks and I hope you accept my sincere apologies for this inconvenient.

As you know, this building is older than it looks
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so
my husband and I decided to paint the kitchen and our living room
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but
, we should pack
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some
stuff and repair the
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cilling
first
.

However
, I am
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so
sorry for what you have been
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
through and
I promise to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the noise as low as I can.

As a solution, we have decided that we will
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stop
working from 12 pm to 4 pm, as we assume that your daughter sleeps every day at this time.

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Please
accept my apology once again.

Kind regards,

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Reyhaneh
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Sadaghiani
, the
next
door
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neighbour
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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