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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs. Smith, I am writing to apologize for the noise that borders you in the last few weeks and I hope you accept my sincere apologies for this inconvenient. As you know, this building is older than it looks so my husband and I decided to paint the kitchen and our living room but, we should pack some stuff and repair the cilling first. However, I am so sorry for what you have been through and I promise to keep the noise as low as I can. As a solution, we have decided that we will stop working from 12 pm to 4 pm, as we assume that your daughter sleeps every day at this time. Please accept my apology once again. Kind regards, Reyhaneh Sadaghiani, the next door neighbour

Dear Mrs. Smith,

I am writing to apologize for the noise that borders you in the last few weeks and I hope you accept my sincere apologies for this inconvenient.

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 my husband and I decided to paint the kitchen and our living room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, we should pack This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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first
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so
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 I promise to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the noise as low as I can.

As a solution, we have decided that we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 working from 12 pm to 4 pm, as we assume that your daughter sleeps every day at this time.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my apology once again.

Kind regards,

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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

130 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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