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You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday. 2. Explain why you must change your plans. 3. Suggest alternative arrangements

Dear Krishna, I hope you're doing well, although I've a bit of bad news to tell you that our trip to Jaipur in November need to be postponed. I know it was me who planned this trip because I've not been on a long vacation since 2017. Moreover, I'm eagerly waiting to meet you and have fun together. Actually, I've to attend a conference in Shimla on 25th November, the day when we were supposed to be travelling to Jaipur. The problem is that my Boss requested me to attend this conference on his behalf and I couldn't say no to him. However, we can plan our trip in the first week of December. Just let me know if these dates suits you or not. It will be even better if you just tell me when you're free then I will manage the rest on my own. I'm looking forward to meeting you Warm regards Sugandha
Dear Krishna,

I hope you're doing well, although I've a bit of
bad
news to
tell
you that our trip to Jaipur in November need to
be postponed
.

I know it was me who planned this trip
because
I've not been on a long vacation since 2017.
Moreover
, I'm
eagerly
waiting to
meet
you and have fun together.

Actually, I've to attend a conference in
Shimla
on 25th November, the day when we
were supposed
to be travelling to Jaipur. The problem is that my Boss requested me to attend this conference on his behalf and I couldn't say no to him.

However
, we can plan our trip in the
first
week of December.
Just
let
me know if these dates suits you or not. It will be even better if you
just
tell
me when you're free then I will manage the rest on my
own
.

I'm looking forward to meeting you

Warm regards

Sugandha
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IELTS letter You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday. 2. Explain why you must change your plans. 3. Suggest alternative arrangements

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  American English
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155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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