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write a short memo or email (100-150 words) that explains the purpose of the meeting and summarizes the ideas that the CEO though were the best.

write a short memo or email (100-150 words) that explains the purpose of the meeting and summarizes the ideas that the CEO though were the best. W8okq
To: Board of Directors From: CEO’s assistant Date: September 08, 2021 Subject: Solutions for the lack of women managers. A meeting with the non-executive directors was held to consider solutions to the shortage of women who are in senior management positions. After the meeting, the following points were the best: Altering the job announcement to include more photos of women to encourage them to apply. Innovating the application procedure by offering more opportunities to women. Since there are many female employees with potential leadership, try to identify leaders at both younger and older ages. I hope this summary will prove helpful in meeting your needs.
To: Board of Directors

From: CEO’s assistant

Date: September 08,
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2021


Subject: Solutions for the lack of women managers.

A meeting with the non-executive directors
was held
to consider solutions to the shortage of women who are in senior management positions.

After the meeting, the following points were the best:

Altering the job announcement to include more photos of women to encourage them to apply.

Innovating the application procedure by offering more opportunities to women.

Since there are
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many
female employees with potential leadership, try to identify leaders at both younger and older ages.

I hope this summary will prove helpful in meeting your needs.
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IELTS letter write a short memo or email (100-150 words) that explains the purpose of the meeting and summarizes the ideas that the CEO though were the best.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
105 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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