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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it qbjr
Dear sire, I am writing this letter to complaint about the product that was purchased from your online website. As mentioned earlier, couple of days ago I ordered electric wax heater online through website know as Amazon and received the product after one week. At first, it works really well later on i observed that after using for 5 minutes it is going to turn automatically. Moreover, still remember that while using heater power of the house got short circuited and i was shock because it has not happen to me before. However, Immediately called to customer service together with detail information, at that time they told me that team will fix it. In addition, I had submitted online complaint as well but still there is no response from company and immensely dissatisfied with the product including business service. I will be expecting to get full refund to my bank account connected with online purchase account, If not I will not hesitate to contact the higher officials of business consequently which leads to decrease reputation of the company. looking forward to get your response regarding my issue. Yours faithfully, Raga.
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purchased
from your
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online
website. As mentioned earlier,
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couple of
days ago I ordered electric wax heater
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online
through website know as Amazon and received the product after one week. At
first
, it works
really
well later on
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i
observed that after using for 5 minutes it is going to turn
automatically
.
Moreover
,
still
remember that while using heater power of the
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house
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got
short circuited and
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i
was shock
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it has not
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happen
to me
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before
.
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, Immediately called to customer service together with detail information, at that time they
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told
me that team will
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fix
it.
In addition
, I had submitted
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online
complaint
as well
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but
still
there is no response from
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company
and
immensely
dissatisfied with the product including business service. I will be expecting to
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get
full refund to my bank account connected with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
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purchase
account, If not I will not hesitate to contact the higher officials of business
consequently
which leads to decrease reputation of the
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company
.
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looking
forward to
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get
your response regarding my issue. Yours
faithfully
, Raga.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

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  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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