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last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words.

last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you YarQ
Dear john I’m really glad that you sent me these picture of our holiday last spring, I didn’t expect you to have so many pictures. this was nice surprise for me and the family especially my wife, She loved all the pictures of us and the kids! Anyway I really wanted to get in touch with you earlier, but honestly I just couldn’t find the time to do so. I was swamped at work after I came back home, and work just seemed to pile up endlessly. I Hope you can forgive me. To make it up to you, me and the family would love to have you visit us. You told me that you always wanted to visit Lebanon, so this would be a perfect opportunity for you to do so. Of course well try to do our best to show you them same hospitality you showed and try pamper you and the family as best we can! Again I can’t thank you enough for the wonderful time you showed us and would love to have you visit us this summer Yours faithfully
Dear john

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glad that you
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me these picture of our holiday last spring, I didn’t
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you to have
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pictures.
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this
was nice surprise for me and the family
especially
my wife, She
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loved
all the pictures of us and the kids!

Anyway I
really
wanted to
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get
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but
honestly
I
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couldn’t find the time to do
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so
. I
was swamped
at work after I came back home, and work
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just
seemed to pile up
endlessly
. I Hope you can forgive me.

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make
it up to you, me and the family would
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love
to have you visit us. You
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told
me that you always wanted to visit Lebanon,
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so
this would be a perfect opportunity for you to do
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so
.
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well try to do our best to
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show
you them same hospitality you
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showed
and
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try pamper
you and the family as best we can!

Again I can’t thank you
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enough
for the wonderful time you
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showed
us and would
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love
to have you visit us this summer

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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