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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have 5Q0B
Dear Sir, I am writing to your agency as an unemployed graduate of Computer Science from the University of Manchester to be shortlisted in your list of job seekers in the state, I would like to work with any of the IT firms you recruit for. Having checked your website, I discovered firms such as Google, Facebook, Spotify, Amazon to mention a few from the numerous list. I have exhibited skills such as programming in C, Java, Python, Java+, and Kegel Computer Languages. I have projects in these languages working as a freelance. I am the backend developer for the Real Estate Company close to your office in San Diego and a major contributor to the website development of the Egyptian Airline. I currently have a certificate to work in any part of the country. I look forward to your response providing a list of job I can apply to and profiling me for interview in roles that I fit. Yours Sincerely, Ahmed
Dear Sir,

I am writing to your agency as an unemployed graduate of Computer Science from the University of Manchester to
be shortlisted
in your list of job seekers in the state,

I would like to work with any of the IT firms you recruit for. Having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
your website, I discovered firms such as Google, Facebook, Spotify, Amazon to mention a few from the numerous list.

I have exhibited
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
such as programming in C, Java, Python, Java+, and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kegel
Computer Languages. I have projects in these languages working as a freelance.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am the backend developer for the Real Estate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Company
close to your office in San Diego and a major contributor to the website development of the Egyptian Airline.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
currently
have a certificate to work in any part of the country.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to your response providing a list of job I can apply to and profiling me for interview in roles that I fit.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Ahmed
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IELTS letter You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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