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last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friend.they have sent you some photos of your holiday.in you letter thank them for photos,explain why you didnt write earlier,invite them to come and stay with you.

last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friend. they have sent you some photos of your holiday. in you letter thank them for photos, explain why you didnt write earlier, invite them to come and stay with you. kaq2
Dear Saurabh, I hope you are fine and healthy. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you send photos of our holiday to me. It was nice time with you all, such a memorable and wonderful holidays. After a long time we all were went for a holiday and experiences was nostalgic. Through this tour we had collected a good memory. Our pictures are awesome and beautiful and also this trip is unforgettable. When we returned back to our home, Suddenly I came to know about my mother illness. She has a fracture in her right hand and has to operated last week. Due all this busy stuff, I didn't write letter to you and for that apologize you. I would like to invite you all to come at my house and stay one week with me. I would arrange a grand party for you all. At last thank you very much for your kind gesture. I would like to appreciate you all for such a eventful trip. Warm Regards, Shivani
Dear Saurabh,

I hope you are fine and healthy. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
photos of our holiday to me. It was nice time with you all, such a memorable and wonderful holidays. After a long time we all were
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".
went
for a holiday and experiences was nostalgic. Through this tour we had collected a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
memory. Our pictures are awesome and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
and
also
this trip is unforgettable. When we
Consider using "returned".
returned back
to our home,
Suddenly
I came to know about my mother illness. She has a fracture in her right hand and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
operated last week.
Did you mean to use the verb "do"?
Due
all this busy stuff, I didn't write letter to you and for that apologize you. I would like to invite you all to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and stay one week with me. I would arrange a grand party for you all.

At last thank you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much for your kind gesture. I would like to appreciate you all for such
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
eventful trip.

Warm Regards,
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Shivani

IELTS letter last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friend. they have sent you some photos of your holiday. in you letter thank them for photos, explain why you didnt write earlier, invite them to come and stay with you.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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