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Dear Ram, I'm extremely happy to hear from you and I still cherish the times we spent together, while I was undergoing the course with you in Canada. Last week, when I was in a meeting with HR, he mentioned that there is a vacancy in a startup company and they are looking for a Cloud Architect. Responsibility for this job includes, leading and setting up the DevOps infrastructure. Additionally, this job profile should train the team who will be onboarded in the future. I still remember you were immensely passionate about cloud (keeping yourself updated by learning all new features in them) and their challenges involved while setting up. Since it is a start-up organization, you will have a numerous challenges while setting up the infrastructure. Consequently, I believe this will be a your dream job. Inorder to get selected for this work, firstly, prepare a resume. Secondly, visit the web address mentioned below and navigate to careers link where you need to provide your personal information. After submitting the details, you will get a confirmation number and a mail id to which you need to submit your resume. Lastly, you should forward your resume to the mail id you received on the screen. Although you have provided your pesronal details in portal, I recommend you to give those again while you send the resume. If you need any support on this matter, feel free reach out to me immediately. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Ganesh
Dear Ram,

I'm
extremely
happy to hear from you and I
still
cherish the times we spent together, while I was undergoing the course with you in Canada.

Last week, when I was in a meeting with HR, he mentioned that there is a vacancy in a startup
company and
they are looking for a Cloud Architect. Responsibility for this job includes, leading and setting up the DevOps infrastructure.
Additionally
, this job profile should train the team who will
be onboarded
in the future.

I
still
remember you were
immensely
passionate about cloud (keeping yourself updated by learning all new features in them) and their challenges involved while setting up. Since it is a
start
-up organization, you will have a numerous
challenges
while setting up the infrastructure.
Consequently
, I believe this will be
a your dream
job.

Inorder
to
get
selected for this work,
firstly
, prepare a resume.
Secondly
, visit the web address mentioned below and navigate to careers link where you need to provide your personal information. After submitting the
details
, you will
get
a confirmation number and a mail id to which you need to submit your resume.
Lastly
, you should forward your resume to the mail id you received on the screen. Although you have provided your
pesronal
details
in portal, I recommend you to give those again while you
send
the resume.

If you need any support on this matter, feel free reach out to me immediately. Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Ganesh
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