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job application in the summer

job application in the summer 2RMAx
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the part-time network assistant vacancy that your community is looking for. I believe that this job is the most convenient option for me since I live near to the community area, additionally I am a network engineering student at US THB which make your community the best place to have more experience. I think I am the best candidate for this job due to my previous job at CBC club, it was temporary on the contrary I gained numerous experience. Furthermore, it is relating directly to my major, and I am professional with network lines programming. As for my availability, the summer break at my University lasts from June until July. During that time I would work flexible hours all the days except the weekends. However, starting from August I will not have time since it is the beginning of the courses. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the part-time network assistant vacancy that your community is looking for.

I believe that this job is the most convenient option for me since I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
near to the community area,
additionally
I am a network engineering student at US THB which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your community the best place to have more experience.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I am the best candidate for this job due to my previous job at CBC club, it was temporary
on the contrary
I gained numerous experience.
Furthermore
, it is relating
directly
to my major, and I am professional with network lines programming.

As for my availability, the summer break at my University lasts from June until July. During that time I would work flexible hours all the days except the weekends.
However
, starting from August I will not have time since it is the beginning of the courses.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter job application in the summer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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