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Dear Ashi, I hope this letter may find you well. Your happiness would no bounds, that I have moved on to a new studio from my old flat. Owing to the, retirement of my father-in-law, compelled me to take this abrupt decision, as they shifted here from the London. This place got congested and we were not able to live independently. Furthermore, they are having a habit of walking in morning and evening for their good health, but they were unable to go from many months, due to no park in my vicinity. Now, this loft is spacious enough it has four bedrooms along with the dining and living hall. As a side note, it is park facing with many amenities, such as, clubs for all ages, nearby market, shopping complex, gyms and so on. Besides this, it is near to the company as well which saves my travelling time. I would like you to pay a visit on the occasion of inauguration party with auspicious ritual on 25th November. Your presence would be like icing on the cake. I am attaching an invitation card with this. I shall wait for you on that date. Thanks Sincerely your Shilpi.

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old
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I would like you to pay a visit on the occasion of inauguration party with auspicious ritual on 25th November. Your presence would be like icing on the cake. I am attaching an invitation card with this. I shall wait for you on that date.

Thanks

Sincerely
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