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You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.

You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Aw2G3
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Hadiya and I recently enrolled for a computer course at college. I am writing this letter to know some information regarding the sports facilities in your sports club. Let me introduce, I am quite passionate about sports and computer, unfortunately, my college does not have sports facilities due to the less space. Thus, I was seeking information from the Google search engine about nearby clubs. I was quite impressed with the customer's feedback about your club's services. Therefore, I would like to request you to provide the desired details at your earliest. Firstly, I would like to know about monthly and yearly membership plans offered by your club. Also, don’t forget to mention the student discount if available. Secondly, I would prefer an experienced personal trainer who can guide me on daily exercise and diet plans. I would really appreciate if you could provide me the aforementioned details at your convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Hadiya Nur.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Hadiya
and I recently enrolled for a computer course at college. I am writing this letter to know
some
information regarding the
sports
facilities in your
sports
club.

Let
me introduce, I am quite passionate about
sports
and computer, unfortunately, my college does not have
sports
facilities due to the less space.

Thus
, I was seeking information from the Google search engine about nearby clubs. I was quite impressed with the customer's feedback about your club's services.
Therefore
, I would like to request you to provide the desired
details
at your earliest.

Firstly
, I would like to know about monthly and yearly membership plans offered by your club.
Also
, don’t forget to mention the student discount if available.
Secondly
, I would prefer an experienced personal trainer who can guide me on daily exercise and diet plans.

I would
really
appreciate if you could provide me the aforementioned
details
at your convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Hadiya
Nur
.
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IELTS letter You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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