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Write to your neighbor because the disturbance of your flat: In your letter you should say: -what the problem is -explain the situation you have -apologize with them -and say what action you will take.

Write to your neighbor because the disturbance of your flat: In your letter you should say: -what the problem is -explain the situation you have -apologize with them -and say what action you will take. XqXAN
My name is Dais Naile. My door number is six and, I live next to you. I’m writing concerning all the disturbance I’ve caused to you. I’ve never received any warning letter for a long time up-to-date. It’s not my intention to make you feel more uncomfortable. I know you are good neighbors, and I wouldn’t like you to move to another flat. First of all, I’ve had problems with my washer machine, the connection to the main pipe is annoying. Since I moved down here, many aspects regarding this problem have cost me a lot of effort. However, renting is cheaper than other places I saw before. Besides, a terrible smell comes out every night. Also, I haven’t had the opportunity of having a nice sleeping night. Secondly, I would like to apologize for any inconvenience to your private life. I will address some arrangements taking into account the time of working conditions with the plumber for next week. As I know you will be on vacation. That would be a suitable moment for putting an end to this awkward situation. That’s why I’m letting you know that this mistake I’ve committed won’t happen again. Finally, I hope you accept my apologies. Please do not hesitate to contact me directly, if there’s something else you would like to share. Yours sincerely,
My name is Dais
Naile
. My door number is six and, I
live
next
to you. I’m writing concerning all the disturbance I’ve caused to you. I’ve never received any warning letter for a long time up-to-date. It’s not my intention to
make
you feel more uncomfortable. I know you are
good
neighbors, and I wouldn’t like you to
move
to another flat.

First of all
, I’ve had problems with my washer machine, the connection to the main pipe is annoying. Since I
moved
down here,
many
aspects regarding this problem have cost me
a lot of
effort.
However
, renting is cheaper than other places I
saw
before
.
Besides
, a terrible smell
comes
out every night.
Also
, I haven’t had the opportunity of having a nice sleeping night.

Secondly
, I would like to apologize for any inconvenience to your private life. I will address
some
arrangements taking into account the time of working conditions with the plumber for
next
week.
As
I know you will be on vacation. That would be a suitable moment for putting an
end
to this awkward situation. That’s why I’m letting you know that this mistake I’ve committed won’t happen again.

Finally
, I hope you accept my apologies.
Please
do not hesitate to contact me
directly
, if there’s something else you would like to share.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Write to your neighbor because the disturbance of your flat: In your letter you should say: -what the problem is -explain the situation you have -apologize with them -and say what action you will take.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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