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missing an item in the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Setareh Soleimaninasab and as you may remember my team and I had an important business meeting in your hotel on Wednesday. Unfortunately, I was preparing for work and could not find the papers we prepared on Wednesday in your hotel; I think I might have left them behind. Tomorrow, we have to meet the shareholders and, those papers are all vital to the company and are required for the board decision making. All the analysis our team made are part of those papers and, we have to find them as soon as possible. I have a favor to ask; Could you please check if those documents are still there or anyone from staff has found them while cleaning the room? And if you find it, could you please contact me? I will send someone to come and get them. Below is my number and Thank you so much in advance. Warm regards, Setareh Soleimaninasab
Dear Sir/Madam

My name is
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Setareh
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Soleimaninasab
and as you may remember my team and I had an
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important
business meeting in your hotel on Wednesday. Unfortunately, I was preparing for work and could not find the papers we prepared on Wednesday in your hotel; I
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think
I might have
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left
them behind. Tomorrow, we
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have to
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meet
the shareholders and, those papers are all vital to the
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company
and
are required
for the board
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decision making
. All the analysis our team made are part of those papers and, we
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have to
find them as
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soon
as possible. I have a favor to ask; Could you
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please
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check
if those documents are
still
there or anyone from staff has found them while cleaning the room? And if you find it, could you
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please
contact me? I will
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send
someone to
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come
and
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get
them. Below is my number and Thank you
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so
much in advance.

Warm regards,

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IELTS letter missing an item in the hotel

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  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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