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You have to write invitation letter to your senior offical.

You have to write invitation letter to your senior offical. KlMgk
Dear Sir/MadamI cordially invati you to a format meeting organized by the company next week. At the meeting will be attended by senior officals from all over the world and we would be honoured if you come there as well. The meeting involves discuss problems in our world and solving problems in any way. The meeting will be held in one of the skyscrapers in the country building in the city centre. I will give you some directions so you do not run into any problems find this building. After leaving the airport, turn the right and 40 minutes drive to the city centre. After you reach the city centre, it is not difficult to find the building that the meeting held. As it is quickly looked due to its huge building. We would be very greateful if you could attend the meeting. If possible, let us know if you will attend or not immediately. Your sincerely. Nozima Gafforova
Dear Sir/
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MadamI
cordially
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invati
you to a format
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meeting
organized by the
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company
next
week. At the
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meeting
will
be attended
by senior
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officals
from all over the
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world and
we would be
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honoured
if you
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come
there
as well
. The
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meeting
involves discuss problems in our world and solving problems in any way. The
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meeting
will
be held
in one of the skyscrapers in the country
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building
in the city
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centre
. I will give you
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some
directions
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so
you do not run into any problems find this
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building
. After leaving the airport, turn the right and 40 minutes drive to the city
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centre
. After you reach the city
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centre
, it is not difficult to find the
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building
that the
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meeting
held.
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As
it is
quickly
looked due to its huge
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building
. We would be
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very
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greateful
if you could attend the
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meeting
. If possible,
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let
us know if you will attend or not immediately. Your
sincerely
.
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Nozima
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Gafforova

IELTS letter You have to write invitation letter to your senior offical.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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