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Dear Sir or Madam I am an international student from Indonesia studying Biology at Umea University, I have had my account with you for about two years already, since I arrived in Sweden and have always kept this account in credit. I am writing to you, as I would like to request a temporary loan so that I can meet my expenses this month. My parents send me a regular bank transfer of 1700 Euro every month. Until now, I have always received this monthly bank transfer without any difficulty. Unfortunately, however, there has been an error at the bank branch in Jakarta and so my parents have not been able to send me money this month. This will be a problem for me because I have to pay rent to my landlord of 700 Euro per month which is due next week. I also need money to cover general living expenses, such as transport to and from college, etc. I estimate that I will be able to keep my living expenses down to 600 Euro this month in order to save money. I would therefore like to request a temporary loan of 500 Euro for a maximum period of one month until my parents’ bank transfer arrives. Your assistance would be greatly appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Suhail Salamat (219 words)

Dear Sir or Madam

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Umea
 University, I have had my account with you for about two years already, since I arrived in Sweden and have always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 this account in credit. I am writing to you, as I would like to request a temporary loan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 my expenses this month.

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send
 me a regular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 transfer of 1700 Euro every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. Until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I have always received this monthly You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 transfer without any difficulty. Unfortunately, however
, there has been an error at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 branch in Jakarta and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 my parents have not been able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me money this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
. This will be a problem for me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay rent to my landlord of 700 Euro per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 which is due next
 week. I also
 need money to cover general living expenses, such as transport to and from college, etc. I estimate that I will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my living expenses down to 600 Euro this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 in order to save money.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would therefore
 like to request a temporary loan of 500 Euro for a maximum period of one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 until my parents’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundtreasurystorestock
bank
 transfer arrives. Your assistance would be greatly
 appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully


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(219 words)