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Dear Mrs. Sweeney I used to be one of your Management students at Beacon College in 2008 and am currently pursuing a career as a manager in the IT industry. I would like to ask if you would be willing to write a reference letter to accompany my application for a managerial job. It is due to your teaching that I became interested in management and graduated with honours. Therefore, now I have this opportunity I consider you as the most ideal person to recommend me. The job I am applying for is a senior managerial post in a large multinational computer manufacturing company based in Madrid, Spain. The role will involve leading a small team and overseeing the completion of regular business projects. I believe I am suitable for this post because I am hardworking, determined and have detailed knowledge of the industry. Furthermore, I also have a proven track record in project management from working as a line manager in France. Thank you kindly in advance, Yours sincerely, Ryan
Dear Mrs. Sweeney

I
used
to be one of your Management students at Beacon College in 2008 and am
currently
pursuing a career as a manager in the IT industry.

I would like to ask if you would be willing to write a reference letter to accompany my application for a managerial job. It is due to your teaching that I became interested in management and graduated with
honours
.
Therefore
,
now
I have this opportunity I consider you as the most ideal person to recommend me.

The job I am applying for is a senior managerial post in a large multinational computer manufacturing
company
based in Madrid, Spain. The role will involve leading a
small
team and overseeing the completion of regular business projects.

I believe I am suitable for this post
because
I am hardworking, determined and have detailed knowledge of the industry.
Furthermore
, I
also
have a proven
track
record in project management from working as a line manager in France.

Thank you kindly in advance,

Yours
sincerely
,

Ryan
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170 words
6.5
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