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Hi jonhmy name is đat. i see you by using my app. i'm 20 years old. i am from vietnam. i have a lot of thing to share with you. how about your hobey? . my favourite is wacthing, i wacth anime everyday when i have free time. absolutely, my school do not have a dayoff for their student. now, i try to learn t to become a dentistry. i want to work as a dentistry because this job can help me earn such much money that i can support my family. my father and my mother are too old to go out to work. at the moment, they need to relax and spent their time taking care themself and being a friend with their niece and nephew.

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jonhmy
 name is Possible spelling mistake found.atcateathatsatbat
đat
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you by using my app. Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 20 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am from Possible spelling mistake found.Vietnam
vietnam
. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of things".a lot of things
a lot of thing
 to share with you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHow
how
 about your Possible spelling mistake found.hobbyhoneyobeyhorahokeyhomey
hobey
? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 is Possible spelling mistake found.watching
wacthing
, i Possible spelling mistake found.watchACTH
wacth
 anime 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have free time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAbsolutely
absolutely
, my school do not have a Possible spelling mistake found.payofflayoffday off
dayoff
 for their student. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNow
now
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 try to learn t to become a dentistry. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to work as a dentistry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this job can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me earn such much money that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can support my family. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 father and my mother are too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 to go out to work. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAt
at
 the moment, they need to relax and spent their time taking care The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.themselveshimselfherself
themself
 and being a friend with their niece and nephew. 