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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take mj2d
Hello Mrs. Tuna, I received your letter complaining about lot of noise coming from our house yesterday. I am very disappointed by knowing that yesterdays' noise had impacted your daughter's study. I'm extremely sorry for such an inappropriate behaviour. I am well aware about policies of this hosing society. Actually, it was my birthday on yesterday. It was my first birthday after moving to Canada, so my friends thought to give me a surprise so I won't miss my family and friends from India. There were about 15 friends and they were not aware about the policies we have in our society. They planned many games and there was a little dance party as well. Because of this lot of noise was coming from our house. I'm apologising for this behaviour. I'll keep in mind to not to make such mistakes in future. We will avoid to do celebration during afternoon time as this is time were most of people need some relax time. Regards, Stuart
Hello Mrs. Tuna,

I received your letter complaining about
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
noise coming from our
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house
yesterday. I am
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very
disappointed by knowing that yesterdays' noise had impacted your daughter's study.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm
extremely
sorry for such an inappropriate
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am well aware about policies of this hosing society. Actually, it was my birthday on yesterday. It was my
first
birthday after moving to Canada,
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so
my friends
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to give me a surprise
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so
I won't miss my family and friends from India. There were about 15
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
friends and
they were not aware about the policies we have in our society. They planned
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many
games and there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
dance party
as well
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
of this lot of noise was coming from our
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house
. I'm
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologising' is British English.
apologising
for this
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
.

I'll
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keep
in mind
One 'to' seems to be obsolete.
to not to
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make
such mistakes
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. We will
The verb 'avoid' is used with the gerund form: "avoid doing".
avoid to do
celebration during afternoon time as this is time were most of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
relax time.

Regards,

Stuart

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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