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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come ANBN
Dear Jane, My name is Alex and I have just recently moved into the building. I live in a flat next to you in an apprtment Block A. You may remember me from last night when we had met in a laundry room. I am writing you regaring the party I am organising this coming weekend. Since, it is a housewarming party, I plan to have quite lot of people over. Furthermore, we will have special guests, they are the guys from local music band The Strings. Therefore, it might be very loud. On the other hand, people can dance, so it also will be a lot of fun. I would like to invite you to my housewarming party. The exact time and date will be confirmed by Friday. I have invited all of our neighbours and I really hope you will be able to make it to the party, so we all will spend more time getting to know each other. Have a nice day and hope to hear from you soon. r Best regards, Alex
Dear Jane,

My name is Alex and I have
just
recently
moved
into the building. I
live
in a flat
next
to you in an
apprtment
Block A. You may remember me from last night when we had met in a laundry room.

I am writing you
regaring
the
party
I am
organising
this coming weekend. Since, it is a housewarming
party
, I plan to have quite
lot of
people
over.
Furthermore
, we will have special guests, they are the guys from local music band The Strings.
Therefore
, it might be
very
loud.
On the other hand
,
people
can dance,
so
it
also
will be
a lot of
fun.

I would like to invite you to my housewarming
party
. The exact time and date will
be confirmed
by Friday.

I have invited all of our
neighbours
and I
really
hope you will be able to
make
it to the
party
,
so
we all will spend more time getting to know each other.

Have a nice day and hope to hear from you
soon
.
r


Best regards,

Alex
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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