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On recent holiday you lost valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything you lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter: 1. Describe the item you lost 2. Explain how you lost it 3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

On recent holiday you lost valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything you lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter: 1. Describe the item you lost 2. Explain how you lost it 3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. GDNe
Dear Sir, My full name is Manan Jayendra Thakkar. I took insurance policy of your company. My policy number is EPF1210508. I am writting this letter to inform you that, I lost my mobile phone during my trip to Goa. My mobile phone model was one plus 5. It was black color with green cover on it. There was one scratch on top of the left corner of phone. It was 2018 model and approximately 28000 rupees when i bought it from Ahmedabad. I was travelling to Goa last week for my vacation. On First day, the phone was with me and i took some beautiful pictures of sunset. Next day, I took watersport activities. It was started early in the morning and finished all the activities around 5 pm. When i reached to my hotel around 6 pm, I just checked my pocket and i came to know that my phone was not there. I think i lost it during my watersport activities. I have travel insurance of your company. I have attached all the required documents here. I was wondring if it would be at all possible for you to check the attached documents and provide your valuable suggestion on it. I am looking forward to your kind cooperation in this matter. Yours faithfully, Manan Thakkar
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Jayendra
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. My policy number is EPF1210508. I am
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writting
this letter to inform you that, I lost my mobile
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during my trip to Goa. My mobile
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phone
model was one plus 5. It was black color with green cover on it. There was one scratch on top of the
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left
corner of
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phone
. It was 2018 model and approximately 28000 rupees when
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bought
it from Ahmedabad. I was travelling to Goa last week for my vacation. On
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day, the
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phone
was with me and
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some
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activities. It was
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early in the morning and finished all the activities around 5 pm. When
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reached to my hotel around 6 pm, I
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checked
my pocket and
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came to know that my
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phone
was not there. I
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think
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lost it during my
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activities. I have travel insurance of your
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have attached all the required documents here.
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was
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if it would be at all possible for you to
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check
the attached documents and provide your valuable suggestion on it.
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am looking forward to your kind cooperation in this matter. Yours
faithfully
,
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Thakkar
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IELTS letter On recent holiday you lost valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything you lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter: 1. Describe the item you lost 2. Explain how you lost it 3. Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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