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• Write and record yourself talking about your job. It should include those 4 parts that we have learnt today

• Write and record yourself talking about your job. It should include those 4 parts that we have learnt today x0Vmb
Hi there, Nice to meet you here. My name’s Tuan Anh. I’m 26 years old. I’m an environmental engineer. So today, I’m gonna tell you about my job. I’m currently working at The Department of Natural Resources and Environment of Binh Duong province. I am in charge of designing and calculating technical the plan. I have been working here for 5 years. Honestly, I’m really enjoying my job for two main reasons. Firstly, this is a well – paid job so I earn enough money to cover my living expenses and raise my family. Secondly, I get to work with many colleagues from the four corners of the country and learn a lot about their work, cultures, and lifestyles.
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I
have been working here for 5 years.
Honestly
, I’m
really
enjoying my job for two main reasons.
Firstly
, this is a well
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paid job
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I earn
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enough
money to cover my living expenses and raise my family.
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, I
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get
to work with
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colleagues from the four corners of the country and learn a lot about their work, cultures, and lifestyles.
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IELTS letter • Write and record yourself talking about your job. It should include those 4 parts that we have learnt today

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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