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Application letter for a job of manager

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Dear Sir or MadamI am very interested in your advertisement which I saw in today's edition of the ''Good news '' newspaper. I am twenty six years aged and obtained an honours degree in managing from Oxford university in 2019. I possess all requested qualifications for this job an the right combination of management and organizational skills. I am proactive an handle multiple tasks simultaneously. In addition, I can speak in English, Russian besides Spanish fluently. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I also have a thorough understanding of relevant software systems as well as excellent verbal and written communication skill. I trust that my academic skills and international experience would be of benefit to your company. If you consider me for this position I would be grateful. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. Your faithfully Zarifa Norboyeva.
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
am
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interested in your advertisement which I
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in
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today
's edition of the ''
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Good
news '' newspaper. I am
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twenty six
years aged and obtained an
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honours
degree in managing from Oxford university in 2019. I possess all requested qualifications for this job
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an
the right combination of management and organizational
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skills
.
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I
am proactive
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an
handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
In addition
, I can speak in English, Russian
besides
Spanish
fluently
. I am
currently
looking for a position that will
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allow
me to develop my
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skills
and experience. I
also
have a thorough understanding of relevant software systems
as well
as excellent verbal and written communication
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skill
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
trust that my academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
and international experience would be of benefit to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. If you consider me for this position I would be grateful. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. Your
faithfully
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Zarifa
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Norboyeva
.
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IELTS letter Application letter for a job of manager

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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