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Asking advice for bringing up children

Asking advice for bringing up children d5M6X

Dear Selena Sorry I haven't written you for so long. I have been very busy with my work and children and never seem to get a minute to myself. I would appreciate if you could give me some advice about how to bringing up my children. As you know, I work at school as a teacher and I am two children's mother. No enough time for being together with my children all day. In contrast at the weekend I am free so able to be with them. If you were me what did you do. They want me to play join with them completely day. Moreover my son's nature is opposed to my daughter's. Thus understanding and growing up them simultaneously are so hard. My son goes to kindergarten but current days because of holding on repairing works there he can't. That's why My difficulties are a lot on present days. I hope you are able to do this for me easily. Because you're experienced mother and an excellent psychologist. I look forward to taking your suggestions for solving this position at the near future. Lovely Nancy.

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 of holding on repairing works there he can't. That's why My difficulties are a lot on present days. I hope you are able to do this for me easily
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 you're experienced mother and an excellent psychologist. I look forward to taking your suggestions for solving this position at the near future. Lovely Nancy. 