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Imagine that you have a friend from another country who is coming to visit you in January. Write a letter or e-mail to your friend, explaining what to pack for the trip. Give your friend advice on appropriate and inappropriate dress

Imagine that you have a friend from another country who is coming to visit you in January. Write a letter or e-mail to your friend, explaining what to pack for the trip. Give your friend advice on appropriate and inappropriate dress PkJpE
Le Thi Thuy Nhung Thuong Tin, Ha Noi 070 515 XXXX souhunfXXXX@gamail. com 7 December 2021 James Michael My friend 123 Address St Anytown, ST 12345 Dear James, How are you? I have missed you since the last time we met. You might be wondering why I am writing you a letter. I heard that you are coming to Vietnam in January, so I want to explain what to pack for the trip. Give you some advice on the appropriate and inappropriate dress in my country. After you get your passport, reservations, and tickets, it’s time to think about clothes. I live in Hanoi city, located in the north of Vietnam and it has a tropical monsoon climate, so in January the weather here is very cold. You can bring warm casual clothes that are not too thick to wear at home. In January, in Vietnam there are many holidays like Tet, I think you can bring some nice, stylish clothes to go out and to keep warm you remember to bring socks, gloves, scarves, hats, jackets. Do not forget to bring umbrellas, some clothes that are easy to dry because it may rain. You should not bring clothes, jackets that are too thick or shirts that are too thin. Regarding shoes, I think you can choose comfortably. I will take you to the temple, so I think you can choose discreet, not too colorful, neat clothes. The weather will be cold, so I don't think you should wear shorts or skirts, tight clothes, and you can't wear them here, either. I hope you will wear shoes instead of sandals, they can keep your feet warm too. That's all I said and Please contact me if you have any further questions. NHUNG Your friend in Vietnam
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7 December 2021

James Michael

My friend

123 Address St

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Anytown
, ST 12345

Dear James,

How are you? I have missed you since the last time we met. You might be wondering why I am writing you a letter. I heard that you are coming to Vietnam in January,
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I want to
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explain
what to pack for the trip. Give you
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some
advice on the appropriate and inappropriate dress in my country.

After you
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get
your passport, reservations, and tickets, it’s time to
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about clothes.

I
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in Hanoi city, located in the north of Vietnam and it has a tropical monsoon climate,
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so
in January the weather here is
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very
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. You can
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warm casual
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clothes
that are not too thick to
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wear
at home. In January, in Vietnam there are
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many
holidays like Tet, I
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think
you can
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bring
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some
nice, stylish
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clothes
to go out and to
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keep
warm you remember to
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bring
socks, gloves, scarves, hats, jackets. Do not forget to
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bring
umbrellas,
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some
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clothes
that are easy to dry
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it may rain. You should not
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bring
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clothes
, jackets that are too thick or shirts that are too thin. Regarding shoes, I
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think
you can choose
comfortably
.

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I
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think
you can choose discreet, not too colorful, neat
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clothes
. The weather will be
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cold
,
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I don't
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you should
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shorts or skirts, tight
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, and you can't
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them here, either. I hope you will
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shoes
instead
of sandals, they can
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keep
your feet warm too.

That's all I said and
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Please
contact me if you have any
further
questions.

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NHUNG


Your friend in Vietnam
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IELTS letter Imagine that you have a friend from another country who is coming to visit you in January. Write a letter or e-mail to your friend, explaining what to pack for the trip. Give your friend advice on appropriate and inappropriate dress

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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