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cancel traveling plan with my friend

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Dear Tom, I hope you’re well. I’m afraid that I have a bit of bad news regarding our traveling plan for both our family’s next weekend. I was really looking forward to catching up with you, but unfortunately, something has come up and I’m not going to be able to make it. I’m really sorry to have to cancel this trip. My boss has just urgently informed me that I will be responsible for a presentation about new our project with a crucial client in HCM city that runs in three days, starting from next Friday. You know, if my workshop success, I may get higher promotion in my current company. I will come back on the following Monday which is a national holiday. On that day off, we are going to have a BBQ party, so you and are more than welcome to come along. I will prepare a special menu for you because I know that you are a big fan of grilled seafood. On another hand, we will re-schedule our traveling plan. Again, I apologize about that, and I hope you and your family can join our party. Best regards, Luc Nguyen

Dear Tom,

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 news regarding our traveling plan for both our family’s next
 weekend.

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Best regards,

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