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I'm writing this letter to invite you to a concert happening in Delhi at the DLF arena on 22nd of this February.

I'm writing this letter to invite you to a concert happening in Delhi at the DLF arena on 22nd of this February. It is a three-hour-long event starting at 7 p. m. Sonu Nigam will be performing live at it. I can't wait to go over there with you. There is an interesting story behind how I got the tickets for this amazing event. While I was at a mall buying some clothes for myself, I participated in a lucky draw. The prize of that were two tickets for this concert and luckily my name came out of that draw. I felt very excited and joyous at that time. At that very moment, I decided I'll be attending this concert. I know Sonu is your favorite singer and you would not miss the opportunity to watch him singing in person. Because we share the same taste in music and enjoy each other's company, I would love to attend this show with you. I hope to hear from you soon.
I'm writing this letter to invite you to a concert happening in Delhi at the DLF arena on 22nd of this February. It is a three-hour-long
event
starting at 7 p. m.
Sonu
Nigam
will be performing
live
at it. I can't wait to go over there with you.

There is an interesting story behind how I
got
the tickets for this amazing
event
. While I was at a mall buying
some
clothes for myself, I participated in a lucky draw. The prize of that were two tickets for this concert and luckily my name came out of that draw. I felt
very
excited and joyous at that time. At that
very
moment, I decided I'll be attending this concert.

I know
Sonu
is your favorite
singer and
you would not miss the opportunity to
watch
him singing in person.
Because
we share the same taste in music and enjoy each other's
company
, I would
love
to attend this
show
with you.

I hope to hear from you
soon
.
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IELTS letter I'm writing this letter to invite you to a concert happening in Delhi at the DLF arena on 22nd of this February.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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