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I'm glad to hear that you're planning a camping trip during your holiday break this summer.

I'm glad to hear that you're planning a camping trip during your holiday break this summer. yLk3l

Dear Chinky, I'm glad to hear that you're planning a camping trip during your holiday break this summer. It's going to be a super excited and adventurous camping trip for you as it's the first time you're going camping. Camping is an unforgettable experience that we always remember because we connect to wildlife and the natural atmosphere especially during the night when we enjoy a black sky with shining stars. You will also enjoy interacting with new people around you. There might be some troubles during nighttime when you may hear scary sounds of wild animals. Another problem you might face is the absence of luxurious facilities like hotels. Last but not least, you might not be able to use the internet as it's a remote location without any mobile network. I also wanted to join you on this camping trip but due to unavoidable circumstances, I'm unavailable during this time. I apologize for not accompanying you on this trip but I will plan another trip with you in the next summer season. I wish you all the best for your camping holiday. Cheers! Puneet

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Chinky
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 during your holiday break this summer. It's going to be a super excited and adventurous camping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 for you as it's the first
 time you're going camping. Camping is an unforgettable experience that we always remember This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we connect to wildlife and the natural atmosphere especially
 during the night when we enjoy a black sky with shining stars. You will also
 enjoy interacting with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around you.

There might be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 troubles during nighttime when you may hear scary sounds of wild animals. Another problem you might face is the absence of luxurious facilities like hotels. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, you might not be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet as it's a remote location without any mobile network.

I also
 wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you on this camping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
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but
 due to unavoidable circumstances, I'm unavailable during this time. I apologize for not accompanying you on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
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but
 I will plan another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 with you in the next
 summer season.

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I
 wish you all the best for your camping holiday.

Cheers!

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Puneet