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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to complain about the Canon camera I recently ordered from your company. I have bought a Canon camera two weeks ago. When I received the item, I checked and I found that it was not working. I can not turn on it. The very next day, I visited your company, one of your representatives, who assured me that the camera would be replaced within 24 hours. After 24 hours, I called her again and she told me that it would take a few days to fix it. I asked the reason but she did not answer. I am hoping that you will agree to replace the faulty one with a new and fresh one. Otherwise, Please refund my money back to my credit card. I look forward to hearing from you at your earlier. Yours faithfully, Duong Pham Thuy
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to complain about the Canon camera I recently ordered from your
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company
.

I have
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bought
a Canon camera two weeks ago. When I received the item, I
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checked
and I found that it was not working. I can not turn on it. The
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very
next
day, I visited your
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company
, one of your representatives, who assured me that the camera would
be replaced
within 24 hours. After 24 hours, I called her
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again and
she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that it would take a few days to
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fix
it. I asked the reason
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but
she did not answer.

I am hoping that you will
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agree
to replace the faulty one with a new and fresh one.
Otherwise
,
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Please
refund my money back to my credit card.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earlier.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter write a letter to the company that makes the item

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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