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Complaint letter about service

Complaint letter about service DqdVW

Dear Mr. Stafford, I am writing to you to complain about a problem that may have been caused by your kids. First of all, as I have been made redundant since last month, I need to spend a lot of time at home. However, your kids make it impossible to have any peace, especially soon after they have arrived home from school. They play with a ball indoors, run around and listen to music too loudly. I have really tried not to pay too much attention to this and I had hoped that things would settle without needing to forbid them from enjoying themselves. However, the situation is getting worse. As I do not use a phone and I have not seen you around in a while, I have decided to contact you by post. I would like to ask whether it would be okay for you to restrain your kids and explain that there are other people living in the house as well. Otherwise, I will be compelled to report this matter to the police. I seriously hope that my letter will not create any ill-feeling between us and we can remain good neighbours. Yours sincerely, Jack Smith

Dear Mr. Stafford,

I am writing to you to complain about a problem that may have been caused
 by your kids.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, as I have been made
 redundant since last month, I need to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time at home. However
, your kids This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it impossible to have any peace, especially
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 after they have arrived home from school. They play with a ball indoors, run around and listen to music too loudly
. I have really
 tried not to pay too much attention to this and I had hoped that things would settle without needing to forbid them from enjoying themselves. However
, the situation is getting worse.

As I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 a phone and I have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 you around in a while, I have decided to contact you by post. I would like to ask whether it would be okay for you to restrain your kids and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 that there are other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 living in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
as well
. Otherwise
, I will be compelled
 to report this matter to the police.

I seriously
 hope that my letter will not create any ill-feeling between Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).us, and
us and
 we can remain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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neighbours
.

Yours sincerely
,

Jack Smith