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You are going to begin a new job, but you faced some problems. Write a letter to the manager of the comany.

You are going to begin a new job, but you faced some problems. Write a letter to the manager of the comany. b3d1q

Dear Mr Warners, I am writing concerning the position of Assistant Office manager that I am due to begin next Monday. However, a problem has arisen. As you know, I currently work for my uncle's food-packing bussiness, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go to hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of the both the home and the business. She asked me to stay on and help her with the running of the office. I realize this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that given circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned. I would like to emphasis that I remain very keen to work with you and that will be gaining further experience during this time. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely.

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Warners
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I am writing concerning the position of Assistant Office manager that I am due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
next
 Monday. However
, a problem has arisen.

As you know, I currently
 work for my uncle's food-packing Possible spelling mistake found.businessbossinessfussinessbushiness
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, and you will remember from my interview that I have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go to hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of the both the home and the business. She asked me to stay on and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 her with the running of the office.

I realize this will be inconvenient to you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much hope that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 circumstances, you would be prepared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned.

I would like Did you mean "to emphasize" (American English) or "to emphasise" (British English)?to emphasizeto emphasise
to emphasis
 that I remain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 keen to work with you and that will be gaining further
 experience during this time.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
. 