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write a clear and concise essay describing yourself to a center of higher education either in the UAE or abroad

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My name is Latifa Nasser Alsaedi, a grade 12 student currently attending Applied Technology High School (ATHS) and my goal after graduation is to attend United Arab Emirates University (UAEU) in which I want to obtain a Bachelor of Science degree in the field of computer engineering. Nevertheless, due to my goal, during my school years, I have chosen to take a wide range of courses in order to prepare for my post-secondary studies. These courses have included sciences such as Chemistry and Physics, as well as, English, Math, Social Studies, Islamic and Arabic. Although my educational choices have evolved around academic subjects, I have also found enjoyment in Visual Arts and Concert Band. While focusing on my academic subjects, I had the opportunity to have the ultimate joy and pride that comes from my volunteer work both in and outside of school. As I have volunteered in several different places for almost 100 hours to not only gain experiences but also knowledge about how to either solve unexpected problems or even have a better communication skill that I might require in the future. Furthermore, joining various online courses for either self-development or just out of curiosity towards distinctive topics or hand crafts, has been always a part of my interests such as, digital marketing, neuroscience of everyday life, cancer awareness, paper art and many other. I would like to highlight that I am planning on taking a gap year to have a greater chance to practice and try on new things to gain a deeper understanding about the college life or even about the world which surely will help me. Expressing my thanks for the time and consideration you've taken to review my application, looking forward for the reply.
My name is
Latifa
Nasser
Alsaedi
, a grade 12 student
currently
attending Applied Technology High School (
ATHS
) and my goal after graduation is to attend United Arab Emirates University (
UAEU
) in which I want to obtain a Bachelor of Science degree in the field of computer engineering.
Nevertheless
, due to my goal, during my school years, I have chosen to take a wide range of courses in order to prepare for my post-secondary studies. These courses have included sciences such as Chemistry and Physics,
as well
as, English, Math, Social Studies, Islamic and Arabic. Although my educational choices have evolved around academic subjects, I have
also
found enjoyment in Visual Arts and Concert Band.

While focusing on my academic subjects, I had the opportunity to have the ultimate joy and pride that
comes
from my volunteer work both in and outside of school. As I have volunteered in several
different
places for almost 100 hours to not
only
gain experiences
but
also
knowledge about how to either solve unexpected problems or even have a better communication
skill
that I might require in the future.
Furthermore
, joining various online courses for either self-development or
just
out of curiosity towards distinctive topics or hand crafts, has been always a part of my interests such as, digital marketing, neuroscience of everyday life, cancer awareness, paper art and
many
other
.

I would like to highlight that I am planning on taking a gap year to have a greater chance to practice and try on new things to gain a deeper understanding about the college life or even about the world which
surely
will
help
me. Expressing my thanks for the time and consideration you've taken to review my application, looking forward for the reply.
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IELTS letter write a clear and concise essay describing yourself to a center of higher education either in the UAE or abroad

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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