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I am writing to draw your attention to the ongoing problems with the Hot water service in the apartment at 5/15 Hilton

I am writing to draw your attention to the ongoing problems with the Hot water service in the apartment at 5/15 Hilton VrL9w

Dear sirI am writing to draw your attention to the ongoing problems with the Hot water service in the apartment at 5 /15 Hilton. As you know the Hot water service has not been working since the 15 th of March. That's why I called the plumber to resolve the problems. However, the plumber arrived without appropriate tools for the joband he had to go to the another person's flat to resolve such kind of problems. So, he promised me that he would Come th next Day to repair. Unfortunately, he did not return until the 19 th of March. The following Day would be Navruz. Some relatives Will be going to ours to celebrate this holiday. So, we have to resolve this problems till tomorrow. I do not want them to fall ill. I hope the matter will be resolved As soon As possibly. Kind regards. Oygul

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