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friend wants to stay at your place

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Dear Sharma, I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. I was overjoyed when I received news that you will be staying with me during your visit to my city. Unfortunately, My aunt suffers a minor stroke and needs someone to take her care. As, I was her emergency contact hospital contacted me and I have tobe there with her. However, You can still use my home for accommodation. I will arrange everything here for you. My neighbor will hand over the keys to you when you'll reach also she will give you the tour of my house and will tell you how to use all the appliances such as microwave, washing machine and other equipment that you'll require. Her name is Karen and she is also my friend. Further, You can use my car to explore the city. In addition, I will text you a list of places you will find interesting so you can enjoy your stay to the fullest but, you must visit the famous Sikh temple in our city because its the most visited place on the earth. I hope you will enjoy your stay at my place friend! . yours truly, Sukhjeet Singh

Dear Sharma,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. I was overjoyed
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 there with her.

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use
 my home for accommodation. I will arrange everything here for you. My neighbor will hand over the keys to you when you'll reach also
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house
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tell
 you how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 all the appliances such as microwave, washing machine and other equipment that you'll require. Her name is Karen and she is also
 my friend.

Further
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use
 my car to explore the city. In addition
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so
 you can enjoy your stay to the fullest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 visit the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 Sikh temple in our city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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 the most visited place on the earth. I hope you will enjoy your stay at my place friend! Don't put a space before the full stop.
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